For the Christian people, in Christmas celebrates the birth of Jesus. This celebration is on 25th of December, when the day is larger than the night (for the northern hemisphere). I love the Christmas because for me that day is a day of rebirth of all thing good, is a hugs day and kiss day, full of good energy :)
I love the Chrisman’s tree and the present, but the people generally go crazy and I get stressed. For my family Christmas is very important because my grandfather birthed this day, but he died five years ago :’(
I like the Christmas because we usually dinner together and later we talked all the night. But this Christmas I was in Santiago, is very sad because I wanted go my house whit my family and friends. But I still like the Christmas <3
Good job, Evangelina.
ReplyDeleteHere are some suggestions to improve some of your sentences.
For example, here,
"For the Christian people, in Christmas celebrates the birth of Jesus".
I would say:
Christian people celebrate the birth of Jesus on December 25th.
And you also say the day is "longer" not larger.
Refer to "Christmas". You don´t need the article "the".
"The Christmas tree" is OK.
Say also, "good things" ADJECTIVE + NOUN in English
Finally, say "my grandfather was born this day"
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